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Miss Dynamite 24 screenplay

Posted by Sirkowski - March 1st, 2008

I finaly moved my ass and finished the screenplay for Miss Dynamite 24. I think it's now good enough for the next step, the story board. Of course there's still place for changes and improvement. I'd like to hear opinions. Is it good, is it boring? I've added some fan service since the last draft. I cut some boring parts. Will Twiggy's origins be clear enough? Especialy for those who didn't read Faster, Dynamite. After reading your own jokes a couple of times, you lose perspective on what's funny or not.
(Screenplay)
TL;DR version: Get fuck your face off!

Unrelated pic below: Oh noes! Plagiarism. (not really)

Miss Dynamite 24 screenplay

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Swordstick76 2008-03-01 13:02:13

just read it, screenplay's good. Long time no see...

Sirkowski 2008-03-01 13:02:13

Thanks!

Abuelodigital17 2008-03-01 13:44:31

the screenplay is cool...
i can't wait for episode 24^^

Egnaifur 2008-03-01 16:21:11

I can see it soo much!!! It's great really great! You got a talent! And your porn is AMAZING!!!!! Mec franchement ça me fait bander à mort! Pis Miss Dynamite elle est super sexy!!!

ZekeySpaceyLizard 2008-03-01 16:51:16

if you're trying to go for the "transformers: Animated" look, you need to make the chins about 5 times longer than normal.

Sirkowski 2008-03-01 16:51:16

And smaller titties, amirite?

Drkflash 2008-03-01 16:52:38

The Screenply is great, but I just don't want the use of the N-word in it.

Sirkowski 2008-03-01 16:52:38

I don't think it's used in this episode. But please, keep things in context. The people who used that word in my movies were racists. So you can't pretend it's offensive to denounce racism.

Barabas 2008-03-01 18:17:01

Hey man, i've always been a fan of the miss dynamite humor. I also want to say that this has the stuff to be another great episode,and the first part sounds like its going to be funny.(man i sound like a kiss-ass)*puts gun to head and pulls trigger*

Sirkowski 2008-03-01 18:17:01

It's gonna be kick-ass AND hardcore.

lilhunter03 2008-03-01 21:24:01

The screenplay is great. That poor furry.

Maximiliano 2008-03-02 17:18:05

Maybe you try a new flash movie, or something if you have time. By the way do you still take request?

Sirkowski 2008-03-02 17:18:05

I've never taken requests. X-D Or do you mean commissions?

latino-toid 2008-03-03 08:49:24

j'ai lu...J'espere qu'il y aura du sang et du Porno ^^ mais pas comme a hawway
ce photo tu l'as pris du nouveaux TransFormer non???
(I HATE TRANSFORMER)

Miss Dynamite 24 screenplay

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